Kirstiana
I really liked your wiki, and your paper was really good. I liked how you explained what an unhealthy relationship is, and what to do it you are in one. Your action plan was good too, but I think maybe you should say how you can raise awareness (like through education programs or something), explain exactly what you can do to raise awareness.
Helen Samuel
Wow. That was so interesting, and I loved it. There were revisions that needed to be done; just simple ones like word phrasing and such, but the overall story and research was very well done, I thought. I'd think there could be more for the action plan, but i don't know. At least the me, raising awareness and educating people sounds almost too similar. But very engrossing.
Leah
Great job on your Wiki! I could tell you both put a lot of work into researching and sharing the information you collected on dating violence. Though it was very impressive, there are a few changes I would make: for one, it seemed like you repeated yourself a lot throughout your action plan and you talked only about educating people; I feel there's more you could do and it would have been important to include in the action plan, such as not leaving a cup out at a big party then going back and drinking from it because drugs could have been slipped it -- things along those lines. I thought the paper was very interesting and well researched, but it seemed to me like the statistics were all copied and pasted. Other then that great job!
Reed Haury
I want to start out by saying good wiki! It was clean, percise, and seemed to fit the scene for dating violence. You obviously spent a lot of time making this wiki as good and useful to yourslves as possible. The sidebar menu is to the point an doe not contain too any pages all leading to related things. I think that you guys work together really well and can do projects really well.
Ben Siegel:
I thought your wiki looked really cool and I could tell you guys spent a lot of time on your paper. I didn’t see where you put your action plan, and I also think you should of spent more time on your sources just by looking at how much you wrote it didn’t seem like a lot of effort went into that, but overall really good job!
Aidan Brooks
I really liked your wiki and i thought you put a lot of work into your paper and your research, but i have one question. How is it that you can raise awareness and convince people that this is happening and is not very good because in your action plan you talk about education and raising awareness but you never say how.
Martha
John and Michael, you did a great job on your paper. I was impressed with your research and the way your paper was organized and your points were developed. Your presentation was also thorough. I agree that education is important to raise awareness, but could you be more specific about how this could be accomplished? Maybe through school programs? And how about our school? How much do you think our students understand about dating violence? What action could you take to increase awareness of this issue?
We will be using this wiki for our project on dating violence.
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To see the sources click HERE
Kirstiana
I really liked your wiki, and your paper was really good. I liked how you explained what an unhealthy relationship is, and what to do it you are in one. Your action plan was good too, but I think maybe you should say how you can raise awareness (like through education programs or something), explain exactly what you can do to raise awareness.
Helen Samuel
Wow. That was so interesting, and I loved it. There were revisions that needed to be done; just simple ones like word phrasing and such, but the overall story and research was very well done, I thought. I'd think there could be more for the action plan, but i don't know. At least the me, raising awareness and educating people sounds almost too similar. But very engrossing.
Leah
Great job on your Wiki! I could tell you both put a lot of work into researching and sharing the information you collected on dating violence. Though it was very impressive, there are a few changes I would make: for one, it seemed like you repeated yourself a lot throughout your action plan and you talked only about educating people; I feel there's more you could do and it would have been important to include in the action plan, such as not leaving a cup out at a big party then going back and drinking from it because drugs could have been slipped it -- things along those lines. I thought the paper was very interesting and well researched, but it seemed to me like the statistics were all copied and pasted. Other then that great job!
Reed Haury
I want to start out by saying good wiki! It was clean, percise, and seemed to fit the scene for dating violence. You obviously spent a lot of time making this wiki as good and useful to yourslves as possible. The sidebar menu is to the point an doe not contain too any pages all leading to related things. I think that you guys work together really well and can do projects really well.
Ben Siegel:
I thought your wiki looked really cool and I could tell you guys spent a lot of time on your paper. I didn’t see where you put your action plan, and I also think you should of spent more time on your sources just by looking at how much you wrote it didn’t seem like a lot of effort went into that, but overall really good job!
Aidan Brooks
I really liked your wiki and i thought you put a lot of work into your paper and your research, but i have one question. How is it that you can raise awareness and convince people that this is happening and is not very good because in your action plan you talk about education and raising awareness but you never say how.
Martha
John and Michael, you did a great job on your paper. I was impressed with your research and the way your paper was organized and your points were developed. Your presentation was also thorough. I agree that education is important to raise awareness, but could you be more specific about how this could be accomplished? Maybe through school programs? And how about our school? How much do you think our students understand about dating violence? What action could you take to increase awareness of this issue?